Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Salter

A Romantic Poem

33 posts in this topic

There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out.

So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this.

Your eyes are the stars,

Your laugh is a symphony,

Your smile makes me glad,

That you're here right next to me.

Now I've just been wondering,

'Cause it may be fate,

Is there any chance,

That you would like to date?

I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha,

***UPDATE***

It worked! Thanks everyone!

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

V approves.

She likes you and wasn't afraid to open up to tell you = why can't you do the same? It'll only strengthen the relationship and will allow both of you to understand each other.

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out.

So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this.

Your eyes are the stars,

Your laugh is a symphony,

Your smile makes me glad,

That you're here right next to me.

Now I've just been wondering,

'Cause it may be fate,

Is there any chance,

That you would like to date?

I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha,

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Ah, young love. B)

Cheesy is good....because at least it's sincere. Girls like poetry, especially the kind that tells them how much you like them, how pretty they are, and how lucky you are to be in their company.

Good start. Don't worry, you'll get better in time.

All the best.

1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

if there is one thing marriage has taught me, its the cheesy, corny, lame romantic movie crap always..ALWAYS goes over well.

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out.

So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this.

Your eyes are the stars,

Your laugh is a symphony,

Your smile makes me glad,

That you're here right next to me.

Now I've just been wondering,

'Cause it may be fate,

Is there any chance,

That you would like to date?

I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha,

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Lol eyes were playing trick on me and i read it as 'a romantic porn'

But seriously that is pretty good,should work

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Lol eyes were playing trick on me and i read it as 'a romantic porn'

But seriously that is pretty good,should work

2

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Ya girls are saps for that stuff just things like jokes and short stories are two other things they enjoy

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

As long as it doesn't turn out like below I approve

Nah, good for you! Best wishes

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

HaHa, that's cute. Give it a try and let us know how it works out. good luck,

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Haha, I honestly had a genuine huge stupid grin on my face reading this, hahahaha.

Dis playa smoov, lol.

:lol:

1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

Atta boy Salter! Glad you met your pepper!

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

I'm glad it worked but I do wanna say that not ALL girls like that corny stuff. It's cute when you've never had a guy do that for you before but after that, overly sappy stuff can definitely turn some girls off.

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

I'm glad it worked but I do wanna say that not ALL girls like that corny stuff. It's cute when you've never had a guy do that for you before but after that, overly sappy stuff can definitely turn some girls off.

0

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

So now it's time to move on to the next phase of the relationship....

I suggest a poem with a first line that ends with the word "duck".... B)

1

Share this post


Link to post
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.