Salter Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out. So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this. Your eyes are the stars, Your laugh is a symphony, Your smile makes me glad, That you're here right next to me. Now I've just been wondering, 'Cause it may be fate, Is there any chance, That you would like to date? I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha, ***UPDATE*** It worked! Thanks everyone! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ V ~ Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 V approves. She likes you and wasn't afraid to open up to tell you = why can't you do the same? It'll only strengthen the relationship and will allow both of you to understand each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buddhas Hand Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out. So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this. Your eyes are the stars, Your laugh is a symphony, Your smile makes me glad, That you're here right next to me. Now I've just been wondering, 'Cause it may be fate, Is there any chance, That you would like to date? I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharpshooter Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Ah, young love. Cheesy is good....because at least it's sincere. Girls like poetry, especially the kind that tells them how much you like them, how pretty they are, and how lucky you are to be in their company. Good start. Don't worry, you'll get better in time. All the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slender Man Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
canuckspride Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 if there is one thing marriage has taught me, its the cheesy, corny, lame romantic movie crap always..ALWAYS goes over well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:D Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 There is a girl that I like at my school and she told me last night that she likes me, and I've been thinking and I like her too. We haven't known each other for very long but I thought, I should ask her out. So tomorrow evening we are going for a walk together and one of my buddies said I should write a poem for her so I wrote this. Your eyes are the stars, Your laugh is a symphony, Your smile makes me glad, That you're here right next to me. Now I've just been wondering, 'Cause it may be fate, Is there any chance, That you would like to date? I know it's pretty bad, cheesy, and probably a dumb idea but I wanted to know if you guys think I should do it or not. She did tell me she likes me so it's not that risky but I wanted your guys' opinions. Please don't bash me for the poem haha, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TACIC Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Lol eyes were playing trick on me and i read it as 'a romantic porn' But seriously that is pretty good,should work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:D Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Lol eyes were playing trick on me and i read it as 'a romantic porn' But seriously that is pretty good,should work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TACIC Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 Ya girls are saps for that stuff just things like jokes and short stories are two other things they enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil_314 Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 As long as it doesn't turn out like below I approve Nah, good for you! Best wishes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WHL rocks Posted September 16, 2012 Share Posted September 16, 2012 HaHa, that's cute. Give it a try and let us know how it works out. good luck, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salter Posted September 17, 2012 Author Share Posted September 17, 2012 It worked guys & gals! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodzillaDeuce Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 congrats little bro smoother than me lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jai604 Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Haha, I honestly had a genuine huge stupid grin on my face reading this, hahahaha. Dis playa smoov, lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UMB Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 Atta boy Salter! Glad you met your pepper! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nucks fan555555 Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 soooooooooooo frickin corny aha but glad it worked...girls love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I♥Wellwood Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 I'm glad it worked but I do wanna say that not ALL girls like that corny stuff. It's cute when you've never had a guy do that for you before but after that, overly sappy stuff can definitely turn some girls off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buddhas Hand Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 I'm glad it worked but I do wanna say that not ALL girls like that corny stuff. It's cute when you've never had a guy do that for you before but after that, overly sappy stuff can definitely turn some girls off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RUPERTKBD Posted September 17, 2012 Share Posted September 17, 2012 So now it's time to move on to the next phase of the relationship.... I suggest a poem with a first line that ends with the word "duck".... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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