Limes Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Whatsup, everyone? I'm making this thread because my buddy and his cousin are trying to be rappers. I told him I'd make a topic on CDC, so if you guys could view the video, and if you have a Youtube account, Like the video, Comment, and Subscribe. Helpful criticism would be appreciated (I would assume). Thanks for reading, everyone. Appreciate the time. EDIT: This is their first song, so be easy on 'em. EDIT2: That picture for the song is supposed to be an 'R', for 'Real Restricted'. Couldn't see it until my buddy told me. Just letting you guys know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
22Sedinery33 Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 LOL they should quit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avicii Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 porque Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armada Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 I'm gonna be as nice as I can be. Maybe another career would be better or at least lots of practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
î мцšт вяздк чфµ Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 beat is good, some vocals aren't clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armada Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 beat is good, some vocals aren't clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limes Posted October 23, 2012 Author Share Posted October 23, 2012 LOL they should quit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limes Posted October 23, 2012 Author Share Posted October 23, 2012 I've seen their "studio" and it's in a bedroom, and they're recording in a closet. They don't have much money so they're making the best of what they can, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charlie.the.Unicorn Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 It sounds like a bunch of comp sci nerds rapping. Which in itself in Charles Barkley's words is tuurribbleee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GodzillaDeuce Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 rappin aint easy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
22Sedinery33 Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Sorry but its the truth, they make Vanilla Ice and MC Hammer look good and that says something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Special Ed Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Sorry but really really bad. Bad tones and no flow at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthNinja Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 It sounds like a bunch of comp sci nerds rapping. Which in itself in Charles Barkley's words is tuurribbleee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limes Posted October 23, 2012 Author Share Posted October 23, 2012 The audio doesn't need to sound as though it's a studio recording in order for listeners to determine whether they can perform. They require a lot of practice, and perhaps should study how some of their influences perform. They remind me of Ted Raimi when he tries to rap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limes Posted October 23, 2012 Author Share Posted October 23, 2012 Sorry but really really bad. Bad tones and no flow at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ossi Vaananen Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Title is misleading... thought this was something of importance; instead it's clearly an attempt at free advertising. The music itself is horrible, combine that with amateur sound quality and we have something remarkably awful. I mean your not serious right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jai604 Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Yeah....... Perhaps a different career choice would be best. No flow, really robotic.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lychees Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Just throw in some autotune T-Pain style and they'll be toppin the charts in no time but seriously, it's already been said in this topic. Go for something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeNiro Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 I wanted to like it, but it's just not good. The beat is average, and the vocals need alot of work. And like others have said, some sort of emotion would be nice. I wouldn't say quit rapping. If it's something that they're passionate about, they should stick with it. But they definitely need to work on alot of things. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
لني Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Is the world really against him/them? In all seriousness art has to, has to, come from the heart. So if the idea is to create something that is deemed "cool" even though they have no experience with said something then it comes off as robotic and forced. Which is why so much hip hop these days is garbage. De La Soul for instance made a killing acting like middle class black dudes, which is what they were. Versus trying to copy others with more street cred. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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