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#1 Rozzy

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 03:20 AM

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Not 100% sure on this one.

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 07:42 AM

don't like the location of the v on tanev. I'd Ike it better if it was on clean ice. anywhere else the text would be more visible.
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#3 elvis15

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:22 PM

don't like the location of the v on tanev. I'd Ike it better if it was on clean ice. anywhere else the text would be more visible.

That was the first thing I noticed too, you actually almost don't see and just 'TANE' registers. I'm not as fond of how the reverse image is just there on the right either, I feel like it should be blended in rather then cut in at the edge of the main Tanev.

The colours, filter and image are quite nice though.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 01:30 PM

love the double render, and the effects aren't bad either. But I have a number of problems with this. the first one is simply the "v" in "tanev", im pretty sure you can fix this by either just A.) moving all of the font to the left/downward. B.) change the font of "Tanev". C.) Put a white square thing under the typeface and over his body, similar to what I've done here with tavares:
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IMO the biggest problem is that he's to blended with the BG way to much, there's very little depth and my eyes go all over the place. Also the center of the lighting is his right shoulder and not his head, in fact his head looks like its darken than the rest of him.

...And the last thing the black and whites. They're both tinted yellow. I think my favorite thing about your Kassian sig is the large amounts of pure black and white.

anyway yeah, if i was in yours shoes I wound lighten this better and make the blacks and the whites more black and white. also the quick fix the the text. But having criticized this so much, I still really like it (especially the double render).
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 10:31 PM

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Posted 04 November 2012 - 10:54 PM

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Better than V1, but I still think your Kassian sig is better than this one.
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Posted 04 November 2012 - 11:40 PM

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Posted 05 November 2012 - 07:36 PM

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I don't mind at all, I like what you did with it.
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Posted 05 November 2012 - 07:50 PM

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IMO, it's too dark. My favourite version is v1. Maybe try to make the background Tanev render less prominent?
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Posted 05 November 2012 - 07:54 PM

actually is it possible that you could upload a PSD for this?
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Posted 07 November 2012 - 02:08 AM

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