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JimLahey

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I really like the background and how the render blends in. But make it look more orangey colour in the BG. The text also looks little rushed to me, I like the placement but maybe choose a different font and the colour. Other than that it looks good.

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I really like the background and how the render blends in. But make it look more orangey colour in the BG. The text also looks little rushed to me, I like the placement but maybe choose a different font and the colour. Other than that it looks good.

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Getting better and it's going to come down more to opinions I think. I don't like the background blurred so much and the last part of Giroux does overlap with similar colours in the text, but not that badly.

EDIT: didn't see v2, the text I think is better, no real opinion on which colour of background is better though.

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