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Alex Edler : Unfinished, need ideas

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It's been a very long time since I've played around with signatures. Not that I was ever all the good in the first place. <_<

Anyway, I've come up with this.

EdlerDraft_zpsaf46de5f.png

I need some ideas on how to fill the empty background space. (I'm awful with text, never know where to put it, what font to use) and how I can make Edler blend in better with the BG.

Or maybe it's hopeless and should be ditched >_>

Edit: I decied to try another picture and here's what I ended up with:

V1: EdlerDraft3_zpsc46c073f.png

V2: EdlerDraft2V2_zpsb93b9df5.png

V3: EdlerSig_zpsd3729729.png

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First off, it doesn't have to be so wide if you don't know what to fill it with, especially since it's not very tall. You could also put Edler off-center (rule of threes) and add text to one side.

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Thanks for the feedback. I'll play around with it based off your suggestions

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I usually like to have just a bit of the overlay (like you have on the background) show through, but that's more personal preference. You might be able to do just a filter of some sort on him or a lighting effect.

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Really simple but nice. You could add some renders effects and text.

Not a bad start!

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Played around with it some more and didn`t really like that I was putting together, I found another picture and tried with that one. Turned out like this

EdlerDraftV2_zps04fec521.png

Copied the ``23`` in the circle idea from the signature (>'-')> made for me. Hope he doesn`t mind

Edit: I changed the lighting a bit

EdlerDraft2V2_zpsb93b9df5.png

Thoughts?

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I don't like the lighting. It's sort of distracting. Also, the 'Edler' blends into the background too much. But I do like the layout and the fonts used.

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Edit: I'm making too many posts <_<

The newest one is V3 in the OP

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You could add a bit of realism and have an opponent skate by him :P

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