Blueberries Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Ive been working on this for around 30mins. Just wondering what i should do now, any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parise11 Posted October 28, 2014 Share Posted October 28, 2014 Not bad, the text isn't my favorite, it looks like a bit of an afterthought. And I would definitely add more lighting. With a couple of changes, I think it could be really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEGCanuck Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 Looks good, also agree with the above comments. Perhaps try a simple font for the first name and use lower case except for the T, line it up on the right and staggered to the left. I think some highlight lighting affects on the crest, etc. may be a nice touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BeefGormley Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 Looks good. I don't know bout you guys but for the font, I would add a bit of more color. Just so that is stands out a bit more with the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blueberries Posted October 29, 2014 Author Share Posted October 29, 2014 Not bad, the text isn't my favorite, it looks like a bit of an afterthought. And I would definitely add more lighting. With a couple of changes, I think it could be really cool. Looks good, also agree with the above comments. Perhaps try a simple font for the first name and use lower case except for the T, line it up on the right and staggered to the left. I think some highlight lighting affects on the crest, etc. may be a nice touch. Looks good. I don't know bout you guys but for the font, I would add a bit of more color. Just so that is stands out a bit more with the picture. Thanks for the feedback guys! Ill have a updated version soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdatb Posted October 29, 2014 Share Posted October 29, 2014 very nice. I am not qualified to criticize this, but I can't think of anything any improvements anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Vintage Canuck- Posted November 5, 2014 Share Posted November 5, 2014 Not bad, the text isn't my favorite, it looks like a bit of an afterthought. And I would definitely add more lighting. With a couple of changes, I think it could be really cool. Pretty much this. Also, good on you for trying something new. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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