Kurt Nirvanagut Posted July 15, 2017 Share Posted July 15, 2017 Hello. So, I live in a miserable city owned by the legend of a former Nazi sympathizer named Walt Disney. And I work as a copywriter, blogger (in whatever oversaturated version that might exist today), co-run an online clothing shop, sing in a $&!#ty band that goes nowhere, and write bad poems. I wrote this poem this week. Joe Casey at the Bat Three badly decomposed bodies discovered in a farmhouse underneath the floorboards the unforgettable reek, not twice could anyone sniff but they kept coming back that morbidly obese curiosity goes undenied Acid attacks are catching on with teens all over London those sad suckers just standing there picking up dropped calls, the types unaware faces lit up like a festival bombing some unexpected Paris night abdominal pain from a parasite you might want to get that looked at before blood clots too deeply and skin purples and missing limbs circle I’ll be fine, you shrug it off never say that you were not warned Left your life for five weeks to separate the strength you possess from the meek upon an exploded view donating your gently used business rags onto others expanding the vocabulary of miserable effect to find a place a second O could go in lose Clickbait, it’s beauty in disarray jailbait, pulling the weeds out of the bouquet dumb fun for everyone, these weekend criminals these weekend parents, the downward trend apologies for the double send. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YEGCanuck Posted July 15, 2017 Share Posted July 15, 2017 Hey Man, I like your thinking. Poetry may be a stretch, but keep working it. Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-23 Posted July 15, 2017 Share Posted July 15, 2017 Well written poem, very interesting, and it makes the reader think afterwards, which in my opinion is the best part about poems. I also love how you have to understand and find the message throughout the lyrics/poem. Poetry is one of the main reasons I fell in love with rap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Masateau Posted August 1, 2017 Share Posted August 1, 2017 Very uplifting! What kind of music does your $&!#ty band play? (I have a $&!#ty band too) Why do you call Walt Disney a Nazi sympathizer? thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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