Gyllenhaal Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 NOT REALLY... so i have to write a poem for school and this is what i came up with: Life Life is like an addiction the innocence of when it begins it shows no harm or sins it's one of your best friends warmth and happiness is all it sends Life is like an addiction it becomes your worst enemy and takes control of your destiny it turns in to an endless struggle and figuring it out is one of the greatest puzzles Life is like an addiction it can feel like your locked up in a prison joint and you will soon reach a point were you eventually have to kill it or it kills you. Any opinions or constructive criticism about the poem is greatly appreciated. Thanks. Edit: spelling mistakes Link to comment
Twilight Sparkle Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 you aint gon out rap someone with those lyrics Link to comment
Grapes-N-Canucks Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Addictions don't have to be thought of as negative. You can be addicted to reading or loving your wife or girlfriend or playing with your dog or eating healthy food. It's all how you look at it. I love the poem though. Keep writing always... Link to comment
Gyllenhaal Posted March 11, 2014 Author Share Posted March 11, 2014 Addictions don't have to be thought of as negative. You can be addicted to reading or loving your wife or girlfriend or playing with your dog or eating healthy food. It's all how you look at it. I love the poem though. Keep writing always... Thanks Grapes! Have fun with Strombo! Link to comment
Silfverberg Snipes Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Well uh, it was ... goodishkindaiguess. Link to comment
Aladeen Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Addictions don't have to be thought of as negative. You can be addicted to reading or loving your wife or girlfriend or playing with your dog or eating healthy food. It's all how you look at it. I love the poem though. Keep writing always... or crack Link to comment
Guest Gumballthechewy Posted March 11, 2014 Share Posted March 11, 2014 Living in a nightmare, Satan clawing at my brain. My world is wreathed darkness, I can feel only pain. My only solice is in poison, I am nothing but a slave. Doing things I am ashamed of, To get the poison that I crave. My life has fallen into ruin, A blackned void full of despair. I live my life for the poison, The only thing for which I care. But the darkness is receding, A light shines through I see. Those who care have come forth, All my friends and family. I have rid the deadly habit, My life is full of clarity. But a dark clouds sit on the horizon, I feel the poison calling me... Link to comment
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