kanucks25 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Hhaah, I didnt mean the rapping battle I meant we were the only ones on here, chattin... I would love to do a battle with you.. But im horrible Contrary to popular belief, the first step to failure is not trying. Go ahead Link to comment
Homo Sapiens' Sapience Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Oh... is THAT what we're doing here? I did not know this... Hey, don't be like that I wrote this when no one was around I'm sitting here trying to formulate thoughts in my mind Slowly coming to the realization, we're all living blind The world enslaves us, we start to lose touch A little bit longer, we'll miss that Eberle's clutch We become too concerned with possessions and wealth We start to forget that true richness is health Our drive to become the best we can be Only leads us to becoming the same, where you're just like me We're rats caught forever in this eternal race When will we learn that we're losing our face? It's time to stand up, and attempt to retrace The moves that we've made, to avoid this disgrace Some say our lives are a blink of an eye I hope when I blink, no one will cry Because when it comes time for goodbye My hope is to leave another blink of an eye Link to comment
Bieksaluvver3 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 If you guys haven't noticed, I'm not even a native English speaker. The first time in my life I wrote something like this, was two days ago in this thread. I'm sure it was terrible, too. Not that anything after it is much better, haha. Your a pretty good rapper though.. You can actually have a good career if you did this.. Link to comment
kanucks25 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Your a pretty good rapper though.. You can actually have a good career if you did this.. No offense to RF but none of us are even close to being good enough make money from it Freestyling in person is different. You don't have time to think, you just have to start rapping and hope it works out... Link to comment
kanucks25 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Hey, don't be like that I wrote this when no one was around I'm sitting here trying to formulate thoughts in my mind Slowly coming to the realization, we're all living blind The world enslaves us, we start to lose touch A little bit longer, we'll miss that Eberle's clutch We become too concerned with possessions and wealth We start to forget that true richness is health Our drive to become the best we can be Only leads us to becoming the same, where you're just like me We're rats caught forever in this eternal race When will we learn that we're losing our face? It's time to stand up, and attempt to retrace The moves that we've made, to avoid this disgrace Some say our lives are a blink of an eye I hope when I blink, no one will cry Because when it comes time for goodbye My hope is to leave another blink of an eye Oh, way to kill the mood. Jokes :D Link to comment
Psylocke Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 It's time for me to switch up the theme of my rhyme I thought I'd give Canuck_83 a piece of my time I'm glad she's a smart girl who doesn't like Twighlight So I dedicate you this verse, tonight you're the highlight Too bad your avatar is just black and white Still you look pretty, and your hair is tight Sorry, I know I know that was corny If only you knew that you're making me h... I'm sorry, I don't know how I let that one out Please take it as compliment, or I'm gonna pout I realize I'll probably get laughed off this board Just want you to know, I'm not like the rest of this herd I put what little I have on the line Maybe, just maybe one day you'll be mine. Link to comment
marinated.pea Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Oh, way to kill the mood. Jokes :D tomorrow ima call it CDC/POKE lol Link to comment
kanucks25 Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 tomorrow ima call it CDC/POKE lol Right now! Link to comment
Homo Sapiens' Sapience Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Oh, way to kill the mood. Jokes :D Haha, yeah I don't know what came over me. Wish I flushed it out a little better, but I really like that last part. Actually, opinions on this one would be appreciated Link to comment
WiLBoY Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Might as well change this to the rap thread. Wutang is forever Link to comment
Homo Sapiens' Sapience Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 This girl is more, this girl is a Diva Her posts' attitude always gives me a feva I figured before I take off for the night I'll grab a ladder, to try reach her height She's like a princess, in a castle with moat I'm like a night, who can't breach the fort But if I said I will stop trying Well, I wont say that, I'm not one for lying I'm gonna reach her, I'm building a bridge And when I get there, I know she won't cringe Although I'm not sure about her reaction Just wanna make it clear, not just looking for action In her eyes, I'm probably looking real creepy I hope it's because she is just getting sleepy Alright, that's enough I'm already a fool I guess goes in hand, with being a tool. Link to comment
Roberto Luongo!!! Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 This girl is more, this girl is a Diva Her posts' attitude always gives me a feva I figured before I take off for the night I'll grab a ladder, to try reach her height She's like a princess, in a castle with moat I'm like a night, who can't breach the fort But if I said I will stop trying Well, I wont say that, I'm not one for lying I'm gonna reach her, I'm building a bridge And when I get there, I know she won't cringe Although I'm not sure about her reaction Just wanna make it clear, not just looking for action In her eyes, I'm probably looking real creepy I hope it's because she is just getting sleepy Alright, that's enough I'm already a fool I guess goes in hand, with being a tool. Get a room! Link to comment
WiLBoY Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 This girl is more, this girl is a Diva Her posts' attitude always gives me a feva I figured before I take off for the night I'll grab a ladder, to try reach her height She's like a princess, in a castle with moat I'm like a night, who can't breach the fort But if I said I will stop trying Well, I wont say that, I'm not one for lying I'm gonna reach her, I'm building a bridge And when I get there, I know she won't cringe Although I'm not sure about her reaction Just wanna make it clear, not just looking for action In her eyes, I'm probably looking real creepy I hope it's because she is just getting sleepy Alright, that's enough I'm already a fool I guess goes in hand, with being a tool. Wow, very nice. Did u write that or copy that? Link to comment
Mr.ArcticLove♥ Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 (edited) Everyone STEP BACK! The Monkey is finally here! Get up, stand up, put you hands together and give a big cheer! I got my butter, I got my rhymes, one thing that's missing is my cold as* beer! You are all looking depressed? Well I'm here, wipe the tear I'm rhyming up a storm in this joint, can't you hear? But please people, your raps need to get better, they're sounding queer I bring the white light in this lounge, I bring it all Without the big guy in here, Haha, you b1tches gonna fall Be prepared, your minds are going to be dazzled! Once I finish up tonight, you will all be a little frazzled Edited January 4, 2009 by Arctic Monkeys Link to comment
Homo Sapiens' Sapience Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 Wow, very nice. Did u write that or copy that? Wrote it of course. Thanks Link to comment
Roberto Luongo!!! Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 (edited) Everyone STEP BACK! The Monkey is finally here! Get up, stand up, put you hands together and give a big cheer! I got my butter, I got my rhymes, one thing that's missing is my cold as* beer! You are all looking depressed? Well I'm here, wipe the tear I'm rhyming up a storm in this joint, can't you hear? But please people, your raps need to get better, they're sounding queer I bring the white light in this lounge, I bring it all Without the big guy in here, Haha, you b1tches gonna fall Be prepared, your mind is going to be dazzled! Once I finish up tonight, you will all be a little dazzled But you got no toast. Baffled my friend baffled. Edited January 4, 2009 by LUONGO!!! Link to comment
The Alchemist Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 (edited) Did this idiot just rhyme dazzled with dazzled? edit: Nvm i saw he edited it. Still weak though. Edited January 4, 2009 by Carlos Zambrano Link to comment
Mr.ArcticLove♥ Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 (edited) Did this idiot just rhyme dazzled with dazzled? I fixed it lol my bad hahaha edit: Nvm i saw he edited it. Still weak though. Sure buddy. You were probably clapping yourself with my entrance. Edited January 4, 2009 by Arctic Monkeys Link to comment
chiklets Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 (edited) CHEEEEEZ-E! Edited January 4, 2009 by chiklets Link to comment
Homo Sapiens' Sapience Posted January 4, 2009 Share Posted January 4, 2009 CHEEEEEZ-E! Hay, who let you in Link to comment
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